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This was made wile i was in a really bad Emotional State mabe part 2 will be more Gorry who knows XD anywhore this is gona be like a 5 - 6 Part thing and i hope you guys enjoy
Credits on the Vid later :)
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:iconchristopherberry1:
christopherberry1 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015  Student Filmographer
where'd you get the base?
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist
everything is custom made by me
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christopherberry1 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Student Filmographer
wow
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ChocoChase Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
GErman :XD:
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Storm-Bond Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
this is Amazing..dude what program you use :) ? Im using mf8
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SaumonTDW Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I thought the thing at the end was going to be another 20$ slender man joke. :(
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Um this isn't a Joke its a Mini Series i am making and the After Ending Part is a Sneek Peek on the Next Part
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HollowFactor Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice bro i hope you feel better
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:icontkrizer69:
TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Well Im Still Feeling a little Crappy but i will be OK :)
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HollowFactor Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
good xD just created my group xD
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist
Group What Group?
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:iconhollowfactor:
HollowFactor Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A bleach Mugen Group we do Ds4 style spriting
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Sorosoro Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Nice Work Bro.
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Thnx Bro :D
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Sorosoro Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Welcome.
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Clethrow Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing man lol
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Thnx Mate :meow:
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Clethrow Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha np man np at all
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MugenMaster Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It's not bad, but the animation is choppy and awkwardly slow sometimes. The spelling and grammar is still lacking in certain places (some of it is really obvious and makes me wonder how you could miss the errors, such as spelling 'regret' as 'regreat') I know you might not think that's a big deal but it really lowers the quality of the animation, since most of the time is spent reading the text. I suggest you proofread this, run it through Microsoft Word or something.

Otherwise, I don't entirely understand the plot yet, but I love how these characters are completely custom. (...Slender man is a little odd and not my first choice for a baddie but hey, it animated pretty well)

Look forward to seeing the other parts - just remember to correct your writing errors.
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Im Trying to Make the Animations as Great as i can For all of you guys and Thank you for pointing that stuff out i will take them under Consideration about the Text Yeah I Know it's Kinda Crappy i try to not Use any short of Text Fixing Program so i can Improve my English on my Own But as you say it takes Away some of the "Quality" of my animation i will use MS Word or something so i can Fix any of my errors now for the Story Part Don't Worry it's Part 1 wait for the Others and then you can tell me if you get it or not :)
If it Helps and it's a thing i forgot to mention on the Description this is kinda inspired as mutch A Continiouation of my Older animation i made called the Slenderman or something
and other than that Thnx for Pointing my Errors out i will try to Correct them as mutch as i can
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MugenMaster Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Great to see you're open to the criticism, not a lot of people are.

I'll continue to follow this series and give you any feedback you want or need, and I am open to helping with anything you need me to :)
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SalTheSpriter Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
AWESOME!!! :icongreatjobplz:
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Thnx Dude :)
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64tre2 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bad-ass, nuff said.
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
8-) Oh yeah~
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yurestu Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
did you get my message on skype
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
yes i did
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yurestu Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nevermind!
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Draox Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
wow, nice jop
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
8-) Thnx
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Draox Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
welcome
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mastersangji Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Tk,You are the Best Bro! I Love This Animation.
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TKrizer69 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Lol Thnx Man :D
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mastersangji Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
No Problem My :iconcoolplz: friend.
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